Short Story Revision

Revise your short story with the notes that your teacher emailed to you.  Please email your revised draft to be edited next week.  This task is worth 8/10 points for this week.  For the two remaining points, email a reading journal in which you discuss a specific passage (quotation) from your book.  Copy down the passage, and write why it stood out to you both in regard to the book/life and how it stands out stylistically as good writing.